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Stuck about 75% of the way through the zombie!porn, so running through a list of drabble prompts I ganked somewhere to try to tighten up my writing and also get a feel for what I'm trying to accomplish with these two. Thought this one might be of interest to people waiting for said story. I think the prompt was 'fantasies.'


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There are things he doesn't ask for.

Risk is an addictive creature, all slithering opiate shivers and blood in his ears, liquid lightning in his veins. But it's called risk for a reason, and no matter how tempting it gets on nights like these, he knows how it would break Rorschach to feel even a single drop of blood, burning with iron and loss, under his tongue.

But there are still teeth at his throat, teasing the skin between huffs of cold breath – and Dan can almost feel, in these dark moments of wantneeddesire, the moment when they (never) bite down.
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*coughs* Dan you kinky bastard.



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tuff_ghost
May. 25th, 2009 09:36 pm (UTC)
but really I just like liking stuff inappropriately
OK, I do have a vampire kink (or zombie, same idea), but I swear it's never been THAT kind of vampire kink.

Now you are making me uncertain, thanks a lot!

I would love to see Rorschach's reaction if Dan ever told him about this. He's probably past the point where he'd freak out in disgust, but I'm sure he'd be at least somewhat ANNOYED. I'm amusing myself by imagining that conversation.

Dan's list of kinks: EVERYTHING
Rorschach's list of squicks: EVERYTHING
^^^that's basis for a perfect OTP, right there
etherati
May. 25th, 2009 09:50 pm (UTC)
Re: but really I just like liking stuff inappropriately
Yeah heh I don't think he'd take it well. At all. There's really not a lot that would put him off of this whole thing as effectively as the idea of hurting Dan. And if it actually happened I imagine Dan's real response would be 'ow, what the FUCK' followed by immediate panic. But people have a lot of things that get them off to think about that they'd never actually want to really have happen.

To be honest I'm not sure if this is precisely the direction I'm going in with it, just an angle for exploring, but yeah. XD These two are so freaking hard to write porn for, I swear.

Edited at 2009-05-26 12:24 am (UTC)
hello_layout
May. 26th, 2009 07:48 am (UTC)
OT pestering
hey I FINALLY figured out how to get rid of that empty space to the right of your sidebar, want the new layout code?

Also fixed multiple IE bugs, and messed around with a different colour scheme. Three different versions at the link, take your pick.
etherati
May. 26th, 2009 04:31 pm (UTC)
Re: OT pestering
Awesome, those look great, thank you sooo much. I'm using the blue one without the title for now until I remember what I was going to title the damn thing, then I'll switch to the title one. :D
bane_6
May. 26th, 2009 07:59 am (UTC)
I guess I can't really blame Dan. If I was snuggling with someone who could infect me or go into a carnivorous frenzy with a hard enough bite, it would be on my mind too. I don't know if I'd evolve it into a turn-on... But, then again, what does it say about me that the part that struck me as hottest was that his breath was cold? Yow.

etherati
May. 26th, 2009 04:19 pm (UTC)
Yeah... it's hard to get a lot across in 100 words, but it's more the idea/fantasy thing where thinking about it is the real draw; as I said to tuff up there, if it actually happened I think he'd freak out pretty immediately and not in a good way.

steals_thyme
Jun. 7th, 2009 03:46 pm (UTC)
OH

OH ETHERATI

See, I'm catching up on my backlog of reading and this is... this...

I don't actually want to go read anything else now. I'm so spoiled :D
etherati
Jun. 7th, 2009 04:56 pm (UTC)
Bahahahaha. I actually had a whole bunch of these zombie!verse drabbles, this is just the only one I posted heh.
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